http://www.52stories.net/issue-113/the-awakening/ Every picture tells a story. What's yours? Mon, 12 May 2008 14:39:26 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.3 http://www.52stories.net/issue-113/the-awakening/#comment-459 DanielleM Wed, 17 Oct 2007 01:55:21 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-113/the-awakening/#comment-459 I liked this a lot, and it fit the picture so well. I loved the line "all the potential for glass blown against damp skin..." -- very evocative. I liked this a lot, and it fit the picture so well. I loved the line “all the potential for glass blown against damp skin…” — very evocative.

]]> http://www.52stories.net/issue-113/the-awakening/#comment-409 johnRibar Sat, 29 Sep 2007 21:00:13 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-113/the-awakening/#comment-409 Really nice! I don't know how qualified I am to rate or edit or give much commentary on poetry, but I personally found this to be a very well done piece. I liked the rythym, the images you brought out. I'm glad to see this here. It is a nice change of pace, and since it is lyrical prose, it fits well as an alternative read. This would be really cool as a preamble to one of the other stories in a collection... you set the stage for the story. Well done! Really nice! I don’t know how qualified I am to rate or edit or give much commentary on poetry, but I personally found this to be a very well done piece. I liked the rythym, the images you brought out. I’m glad to see this here. It is a nice change of pace, and since it is lyrical prose, it fits well as an alternative read. This would be really cool as a preamble to one of the other stories in a collection… you set the stage for the story. Well done!

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