Comments on: Folk Wisdom http://www.52stories.net/issue-113/folk-wisdom/ Every picture tells a story. What's yours? Fri, 04 Jul 2008 02:42:36 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.3 By: johnRibar http://www.52stories.net/issue-113/folk-wisdom/#comment-411 johnRibar Sat, 29 Sep 2007 21:16:34 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-113/folk-wisdom/#comment-411 I am caught between cool and yuck! This is really a strange story, but well written anyway ;-) The only continuity issue I have is how the narrator can crawl, but the other two are so "out" that they can burn without even a good yell... But beyond that, this had me hooked long before I got to the beach, and then I just had to stand there in horror and watch... Let us know how it turns out! I am caught between cool and yuck! This is really a strange story, but well written anyway ;-)
The only continuity issue I have is how the narrator can crawl, but the other two are so “out” that they can burn without even a good yell…

But beyond that, this had me hooked long before I got to the beach, and then I just had to stand there in horror and watch…

Let us know how it turns out!

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