http://www.52stories.net/issue-110/school-of-hard-rocks/ Every picture tells a story. What's yours? Fri, 04 Jul 2008 02:33:03 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.3 http://www.52stories.net/issue-110/school-of-hard-rocks/#comment-381 John Ribar Mon, 17 Sep 2007 17:31:53 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-110/school-of-hard-rocks/#comment-381 I thought I was getting pulled into the story pretty well with the details, grunts and groans, and descriptions. You (narrator) appeared as the expert, helping us understand what was happening. The end came really quick. If I knew a little more about the group, I could see this as a really good prank. As it was, it was a good introduction to the current state of affairs of the characters, and a little more about climbing than I knew before woven in gently, so I enjoyed the read. I thought I was getting pulled into the story pretty well with the details, grunts and groans, and descriptions. You (narrator) appeared as the expert, helping us understand what was happening.
The end came really quick.
If I knew a little more about the group, I could see this as a really good prank. As it was, it was a good introduction to the current state of affairs of the characters, and a little more about climbing than I knew before woven in gently, so I enjoyed the read.

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