Comments on: Permanent Vacation http://www.52stories.net/issue-110/permanent-vacation/ Every picture tells a story. What's yours? Thu, 11 Mar 2010 21:53:11 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7.1 hourly 1 By: James Warrenfeltz http://www.52stories.net/issue-110/permanent-vacation/comment-page-1/#comment-366 James Warrenfeltz Sun, 16 Sep 2007 17:34:24 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-110/permanent-vacation/#comment-366 This story had a good setup and twist - I got a bit lost during the section of dialog, but maybe it's not important we know anything about who is talking, or what they are like. I do want to know why a bunch of spouse killers meets - is it a convention, like the serial killer convention in the Sandman comics? This story had a good setup and twist - I got a bit lost during the section of dialog, but maybe it’s not important we know anything about who is talking, or what they are like.

I do want to know why a bunch of spouse killers meets - is it a convention, like the serial killer convention in the Sandman comics?

]]> By: Skought http://www.52stories.net/issue-110/permanent-vacation/comment-page-1/#comment-321 Skought Mon, 10 Sep 2007 14:27:03 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-110/permanent-vacation/#comment-321 The most unnerving part for me was how calm the narrator came across. Clearly he is disconnected from any normal human emotional state. That being said, I’ve lived long enough to believe it is believable he convinced someone to marry him. The most unnerving part for me was how calm the narrator came across. Clearly he is disconnected from any normal human emotional state. That being said, I’ve lived long enough to believe it is believable he convinced someone to marry him.

]]> By: DanielleM http://www.52stories.net/issue-110/permanent-vacation/comment-page-1/#comment-309 DanielleM Mon, 10 Sep 2007 05:57:20 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-110/permanent-vacation/#comment-309 No need to apologize for a short short story -- it certainly packed a punch in a small amount of space! Well written and surprising! No need to apologize for a short short story — it certainly packed a punch in a small amount of space! Well written and surprising!

]]> By: drew http://www.52stories.net/issue-110/permanent-vacation/comment-page-1/#comment-268 drew Sat, 08 Sep 2007 20:40:27 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-110/permanent-vacation/#comment-268 Pretty good for a story that you whipped together. I really like the premise. Very clever! Pretty good for a story that you whipped together. I really like the premise. Very clever!

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