Comments on: The Bathroom (part 2) http://www.52stories.net/issue-109/the-bathroom-part-2/ Every picture tells a story. What's yours? Mon, 03 May 2010 08:03:25 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: DanielleM http://www.52stories.net/issue-109/the-bathroom-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-231 DanielleM Fri, 07 Sep 2007 06:00:30 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-109/the-bathroom-part-2/#comment-231 Definitely an experience every parent can relate to (minus the whole bathroom-leading-to-other-dimension component...) :-) I'm looking forward to the next installment! So a question -- do you already have an idea for how the plot of the story will pan out overall, or do you wait for the next picture to lead the story in what direction it will? Definitely an experience every parent can relate to (minus the whole bathroom-leading-to-other-dimension component…) :-) I’m looking forward to the next installment!

So a question — do you already have an idea for how the plot of the story will pan out overall, or do you wait for the next picture to lead the story in what direction it will?

]]> By: tom http://www.52stories.net/issue-109/the-bathroom-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-212 tom Wed, 05 Sep 2007 17:23:38 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-109/the-bathroom-part-2/#comment-212 The details paint a very clear picture in this story. I've experienced my child being lost in a crowd, and you captured the emotions very nicely. Especially the split second decisions one makes on whether to alert the wife - now that brings back memories! Nicely done (again). Looking forward to see how the landscape in 1.10 works with the storyline. The details paint a very clear picture in this story. I’ve experienced my child being lost in a crowd, and you captured the emotions very nicely. Especially the split second decisions one makes on whether to alert the wife – now that brings back memories! Nicely done (again). Looking forward to see how the landscape in 1.10 works with the storyline.

]]> By: drew http://www.52stories.net/issue-109/the-bathroom-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-161 drew Sun, 02 Sep 2007 16:44:09 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-109/the-bathroom-part-2/#comment-161 <p>"Dodging between pedestrians, most dressed in the depressing dark earth tones of Europe, my wallet and my camera in my cargo pockets thumped my legs rhythmically."</p> <p>I like that. That little detail snapped me right in there. It was like, "Yeah, I have those cargo shorts. I know that feeling."</p> <p>Looking forward to Part 3. I suspect that the misty waters and towering mountain peaks in Issue 1.10 will play quite nicely into it. </p> <p>We'll see... :)</p> “Dodging between pedestrians, most dressed in the depressing dark earth tones of Europe, my wallet and my camera in my cargo pockets thumped my legs rhythmically.”

I like that. That little detail snapped me right in there. It was like, “Yeah, I have those cargo shorts. I know that feeling.”

Looking forward to Part 3. I suspect that the misty waters and towering mountain peaks in Issue 1.10 will play quite nicely into it.

We’ll see… :)

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