http://www.52stories.net/issue-105/pescis-fish-house/ Every picture tells a story. What's yours? Mon, 03 May 2010 08:03:25 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 http://www.52stories.net/issue-105/pescis-fish-house/comment-page-1/#comment-60 James Warrenfeltz Sun, 12 Aug 2007 14:10:41 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-106/pescis-fish-house/#comment-60 Daniel, I'm interested in your opinion - what didn't work for you 100%- so I can improve any potential second draft. Daniel, I’m interested in your opinion – what didn’t work for you 100%- so I can improve any potential second draft.

]]> http://www.52stories.net/issue-105/pescis-fish-house/comment-page-1/#comment-48 Tom Mon, 06 Aug 2007 20:59:48 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-106/pescis-fish-house/#comment-48 Powerful ending! Good character development and setting. The sentences could be tighter but that is an easy fixed. Powerful ending! Good character development and setting. The sentences could be tighter but that is an easy fixed.

]]> http://www.52stories.net/issue-105/pescis-fish-house/comment-page-1/#comment-42 Skought Mon, 06 Aug 2007 17:21:42 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-106/pescis-fish-house/#comment-42 The ending was GREAT. The ending was GREAT.

]]> http://www.52stories.net/issue-105/pescis-fish-house/comment-page-1/#comment-40 Martha Cox Mon, 06 Aug 2007 14:47:25 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-106/pescis-fish-house/#comment-40 Good character development! I really recalled a lot of teenage angst and longing while reading this story. The mystery about the Pescis and Marena is a nice twist, also. Very fun story! Good character development! I really recalled a lot of teenage angst and longing while reading this story. The mystery about the Pescis and Marena is a nice twist, also. Very fun story!

]]> http://www.52stories.net/issue-105/pescis-fish-house/comment-page-1/#comment-37 John Ribar Sat, 04 Aug 2007 19:06:09 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-106/pescis-fish-house/#comment-37 Really nice. The story is well built, and leads to a surprising but acceptable ending. Lots of good description. The only thing I would question is the length of some of the sentences - got a little hard to follow, but didn't detract much from the story. Really nice. The story is well built, and leads to a surprising but acceptable ending. Lots of good description. The only thing I would question is the length of some of the sentences – got a little hard to follow, but didn’t detract much from the story.

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