http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/the-pool/ Every picture tells a story. What's yours? Fri, 04 Jul 2008 02:35:28 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.3 http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/the-pool/#comment-31 Skought Fri, 03 Aug 2007 12:43:59 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/the-pool/#comment-31 I was genuinely worried about Shelly, that was for me the strongest part of your story. I was genuinely worried about Shelly, that was for me the strongest part of your story.

]]> http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/the-pool/#comment-28 tom Thu, 02 Aug 2007 14:58:25 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/the-pool/#comment-28 I was hoping Cassandra and Fredrick would live happily ever after, but I suppose dying at the peak of happiness isn't a bad way to go. Nicely done, and a good 'shocker' ending. I was hoping Cassandra and Fredrick would live happily ever after, but I suppose dying at the peak of happiness isn’t a bad way to go. Nicely done, and a good ’shocker’ ending.

]]> http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/the-pool/#comment-22 Dad Mon, 30 Jul 2007 21:10:55 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/the-pool/#comment-22 Interesting story and I was not expecting that ending from you. Interesting story and I was not expecting that ending from you.

]]> http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/the-pool/#comment-10 Elizabeth Sun, 29 Jul 2007 05:27:07 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/the-pool/#comment-10 Yikes! I wasn't expecting this to be a scary story. Good job! Bad Pool! Yikes! I wasn’t expecting this to be a scary story. Good job! Bad Pool!

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