http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/the-gamble/ Every picture tells a story. What's yours? Fri, 04 Jul 2008 02:36:18 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.3 http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/the-gamble/#comment-29 Skought Thu, 02 Aug 2007 20:37:32 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/the-gamble/#comment-29 Powerful beginning, and interesting details sprinkled throughout. I like how you left the ending the more I think about it. Powerful beginning, and interesting details sprinkled throughout. I like how you left the ending the more I think about it.

]]> http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/the-gamble/#comment-25 John Ribar Wed, 01 Aug 2007 02:57:38 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/the-gamble/#comment-25 Nice job! Good description of his surroundings, and I especially liked the Coke machine "shred[ing] the remaining fabric of his slumber". I don't think it matters if he won or lost - he found his peace. Nice job! Good description of his surroundings, and I especially liked the Coke machine “shred[ing] the remaining fabric of his slumber”. I don’t think it matters if he won or lost - he found his peace.

]]> http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/the-gamble/#comment-23 Will Shattuck Tue, 31 Jul 2007 19:44:37 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/the-gamble/#comment-23 So did he win or lose? I'm pretty sure he won, but you never know :) So did he win or lose? I’m pretty sure he won, but you never know

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