http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/faux-pas/ Every picture tells a story. What's yours? Fri, 04 Jul 2008 02:37:06 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.3 http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/faux-pas/#comment-34 Skought Fri, 03 Aug 2007 13:07:00 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/faux-pas/#comment-34 Well written, and good vocabulary. I’m eager to see more of your work. Well written, and good vocabulary. I’m eager to see more of your work.

]]> http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/faux-pas/#comment-17 tom Mon, 30 Jul 2007 14:09:50 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/faux-pas/#comment-17 This has the ring of a true story. . .hmmmm. Maybe that's attributable to the fine details of the party. I could hear the music, the splash from the table. Nice story. This has the ring of a true story. . .hmmmm. Maybe that’s attributable to the fine details of the party. I could hear the music, the splash from the table. Nice story.

]]> http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/faux-pas/#comment-15 Will Shattuck Mon, 30 Jul 2007 07:13:11 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/faux-pas/#comment-15 This was good. I thought something bad was going to happen after the two men came up to her, but I couldn't figure out what. Good foreshadowing :) This was good. I thought something bad was going to happen after the two men came up to her, but I couldn’t figure out what. Good foreshadowing

]]> http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/faux-pas/#comment-13 drew Sun, 29 Jul 2007 16:19:09 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/faux-pas/#comment-13 "Jay Gatsby's mosh pit." Outstanding. “Jay Gatsby’s mosh pit.” Outstanding.

]]> http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/faux-pas/#comment-11 Elizabeth Sun, 29 Jul 2007 05:35:49 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/faux-pas/#comment-11 Wow - now I really want to know who were the bad guys really looking for and why????? Very good writing but I want to find out more! Wow - now I really want to know who were the bad guys really looking for and why????? Very good writing but I want to find out more!

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