Comments on: Black and White http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/black-and-white/ Every picture tells a story. What's yours? Fri, 04 Jul 2008 02:40:18 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.3 By: 52stories - the first batch http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/black-and-white/#comment-401 52stories - the first batch Wed, 26 Sep 2007 13:31:47 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/black-and-white/#comment-401 [...] Black and White - in which a man on business travel realizes how much he misses his [...] […] Black and White - in which a man on business travel realizes how much he misses his […]

]]> By: Skought http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/black-and-white/#comment-32 Skought Fri, 03 Aug 2007 12:49:10 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/black-and-white/#comment-32 Excellent work. This is believable, detailed, realistic and moving. I’m going to enjoy your future work, I can tell. Excellent work. This is believable, detailed, realistic and moving. I’m going to enjoy your future work, I can tell.

]]> By: tom http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/black-and-white/#comment-19 tom Mon, 30 Jul 2007 14:16:53 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/black-and-white/#comment-19 I liked this: "The wife that no longer seemed to miss him. The children who, although he was sure they loved him, had lives of their own now, and didn’t have much time for “dear old dad”." I also liked how you described the pool area as black and white in the pre-dawn. Good descriptions. I liked this: “The wife that no longer seemed to miss him. The children who, although he was sure they loved him, had lives of their own now, and didn’t have much time for “dear old dad”.” I also liked how you described the pool area as black and white in the pre-dawn. Good descriptions.

]]> By: drew http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/black-and-white/#comment-14 drew Sun, 29 Jul 2007 16:22:53 +0000 http://www.52stories.net/issue-104/black-and-white/#comment-14 I like the way you worked the monochromatic photo into your descriptions. Very true to the picture, but you still branched out with your descriptions. Good attention to detail. Perhaps a little autobiographical? Business traveling sucks after awhile. Nice story. I like the way you worked the monochromatic photo into your descriptions. Very true to the picture, but you still branched out with your descriptions. Good attention to detail. Perhaps a little autobiographical? Business traveling sucks after awhile.

Nice story.

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